I started this last night, then finished it just now.
It didn’t take up much time; I was too tired to finish it and then started again a few minutes ago.

I think some of this is alright. I was too limiting with line length though, which led to something rather uneven.

I hope you enjoy.

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A cold night
With clear skies
Appears still
And wholly formed

The satellite rises
On its path
And slowly
Disappears

Consumed it is
By stretched shadow
Yet it retains
Visibility

Rather than fade
The satellite
Takes on new light
Bathed in blood