Not sure where I was going with this one.
I think it’s a little uneven. Some lines work; others not so much.
I do know that I was trying to push away from short and simple lines.
The imagery works, though perhaps not as well as it could.
I hope you enjoy.
Too much time spent carried on currents
And so I’ve come back to earth
Only to find that I know not where I am
Nor do I know how to return
For the currents no longer keep me adrift
I take a step and follow it with another
And through this process I walk
The direction of forward was chosen
For there seemed no other choice
Other than what was ahead of me
I walked for days upon days
Though perhaps it was really weeks
It was something of which I was uncertain
For whilst day and night came and went
All transitions became indistinct
Eventually I upon my path a massive structure
Formed from ice, at least in appearance
There seemed nowhere left to walk
And so I had to pass through
Fascinated, I reached out and touched the structure