A Poem About Sweating

Yeah look, this is rough.
I’ve wanted to write more bad poetry for a while and decided it was time to force myself.
Was it a good idea? Probably not. Can definitely do better than this. However, it gets the imagery across well enough.

I hope you enjoy.

Openings ready to keep things close
They start releasing
Heat flows through with steady movement
Sticks close to the vents
As clear treacle oozes

Sheets slowly soak
Widening the waste
Heat holds, trapped between layers
Until it thins enough
Escaping its space

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About Stupidity Hole

I'm some guy that does stuff. Hoping to one day fill the internet with enough insane ramblings to impress a cannibal rat ship. I do more than I probably should. I have a page called MS Paint Masterpieces that you may be interested in checking out. I also co-run Culture Eater, an online zine for covering the arts among other things. We're on Patreon!
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