Not sure about this one, but then again I’m seldom positive about the quality of these bits of poetry.
This one I think is pretty clear and direct. Probably more so than other “poems” I’ve written.
I hope you enjoy.
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A quietness outside
Occasional stretches
But otherwise “silence”
A sound inside
Somewhat clear
Yet distant and vague
Somehow the two meet
In sensible unison
And paint the background