I scrapped the last thing I wrote, then churned this out.
Written in a rush, but this is a significant improvement.

Maybe decent. There are things I need to improve upon with these.

I hope you enjoy.

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I had an idea
It was written out
I looked upon its being
And cast it aside

Perhaps that was incorrect
And the idea was fine
However, what I saw
Was not what I recognised

The thoughts were there
They spread meaning
Yet the words conveyed
An uneasy read

Too many words
And too many letters
Led to much waste
When less sufficed

And so now that idea
Is cast aside
To be refined
At another time