A Poem About not Sharing a Poem

I scrapped the last thing I wrote, then churned this out.
Written in a rush, but this is a significant improvement.

Maybe decent. There are things I need to improve upon with these.

I hope you enjoy.

I had an idea
It was written out
I looked upon its being
And cast it aside

Perhaps that was incorrect
And the idea was fine
However, what I saw
Was not what I recognised

The thoughts were there
They spread meaning
Yet the words conveyed
An uneasy read

Too many words
And too many letters
Led to much waste
When less sufficed

And so now that idea
Is cast aside
To be refined
At another time

About Stupidity Hole

I'm some guy that does stuff. Hoping to one day fill the internet with enough insane ramblings to impress a cannibal rat ship. I do more than I probably should. I have a page called MS Paint Masterpieces that you may be interested in checking out. I also co-run Culture Eater, an online zine for covering the arts among other things. We're on Patreon!
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